[Report This]Date: June 30 2015 2:09 PM Title: Dinner with the Dragon
Really interested to see where you take this. I like this two characters immensely already and I wonder what type of quirk Alatha has to go with Velia's fetish.
aaron
[Report This]Date: June 30 2015 11:50 AM Title: Dinner with the Dragon
You've done it again, another great set of characters. I think this story in particular highlights something I love about this fetish. Something dead sexy about one character having the power of life and death over another and choosing to spare her. Velia is clearly a younger and more innocent character. It seems now like she really had no chance against Alatha considering her heat has no limit. The fact that Velia is only alive because of a chance meeting and her decision to help Alatha get a quarter is just too cute.
I wonder if there will be more depth to Alatha or if she is truely just stealing things for personal gain. Will love to see how their relationship evolves.
Author's Response:
Howdy, Combine! Glad to see you like this one of mine as well.
Hopefully it can keep your interest as much as my others have as it goes along!
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[Report This]Date: June 30 2015 3:40 AM Title: Dinner with the Dragon
Awesome job so far, I'm really enjoying it. I've been wanting to see a superhero story starring a shrunken woman, and this looks like just what I was hoping for. Both characters are very well thought out, and very different, so I can't wait to see how they are together. I'll be eagerly waiting to see your next chapter.
Author's Response:
I've had the idea rattling around for a bit since I've wanted to actually write a superhero story for a long while now. Pleased to see I wasn't the only one who considered it a possibly good concept! Hopefully I can keep your interest in the chapters to come!
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