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Reviewer: sorsha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2015 4:19 PM Title: Out in the Open

Fantastic storytelling! It's a thrill to read. At last! Real development and great characters. I can't wait to read more from this author! WOW!

Reviewer: combine45 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2015 12:17 AM Title: Out in the Open

Hmm I think I have some similarities with Velia haha. They seem like the perfect pair for each other. Nice to see even a crimnal like Alatha can have a hobby she really enjoys at the aquarium.

I'm glad Alatha doesn't seem like she's going to be an abusive partner or something, she was interested to see what Velia was down for like a normal caring partner would be. 

Can't wait to see more.

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