[Report This]Date: July 02 2015 11:10 PM Title: In Her Boots
Wow that was a very well done in shoe section!!! The way you describe the smells and sensations she was feeling was very well done. It would certainly seem you know a thing or too about female orgasms :). Again I'm amazed at how well you are doing this Caring relationship. Alatha despite her villain self obviously spent alot of time thinking about how to please Velia while keeping her safe. Despite us keeping in Velia's perspective you can tell that Alatha is eager to please her too even in her sadistic persona.
Not having to fear for the little character's life every chapter is certainly something new from your storys and I'm liking it so far. Their S&M relationship allows you to keep using your strengths in that front as well. I'd say I'm curious whether Alatha will corrupt Velia or Velia will get Alatha to give up her life of crime, but I'm enjoying the journey so much that I don't really care to think that far ahead right now.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Good to know I didn't botch it.
Caring relationships have never been my strength. Even in my writings outside of GTS type stuff I tend to enjoy writing the darker things. Powerstruggles, fights for dominance, and cruelty tend to flow rather easily. Building a healthy and loving relationship and keeping it at least halfway believable is actually pretty hard as it turns out. Nice exercise though!
Anyway, thanks as always for the review and the thoughts!
Date: July 02 2015 9:42 PM Title: In Her Boots
Good story so far. I always love seeing superheroes and GTS elements combined. A forbidden love affair between a hero and villain is an interesting concept. I wonder how long they can keep this going before it becomes difficult to turn a blind eye to the other's lifestyle.
I'm curious about Velia's powers. You've mentioned that supers are durable but she still feared being stepped on or crushed in Alatha's hand. Does she not retain her full strength at tiny size the way the Atom or Ant-Man do? Seems like fighting crime with shrinking powers would be pretty dangerous without some sort of enhancement to one's strength.
Author's Response:
Howdy, I've been wanting to do a GTS superhero type story and I figured this particular situation might offer some fun moments.
As to her powers, she'd durable certainly but when shrunken she is much weaker than normal. So if someone stomped hard enough she'd be squished. So, to offset this she usually uses her abilities to disorient and confuse as I tried to show with her earlier fight with Alatha. It also makes her pretty good a sneaking. There is also a little more to her abilities I haven't fully disclosed yet, but essentially I wanted her to possess some downside to being tiny.
Hope that clears it up a bit and thank you for the review!