[Report This]Date: July 06 2015 11:53 PM Title: Working Through The Bad
I love what you've been doing so far, and I'm really enjoying each additional chapter. You've got a good balance of size play and normal interaction going. The way the characters are written is great, and they play off of each other really well. You seem to have a good understanding of the roles of S&M, the fact that it's not all pain and pleasure. That there is a lot of planning and precautions to take. It is something that is featured heavily in a comic I read on deviantart, called Sunstone. Again though, great job, and I can't wait to see what's next.
Author's Response:
S&M was something I knew little about before actually doing a bit of research myself. Before that I figured it was just whips, cuffs, and gags. However there is a good bit of safety concerns to address. Time spent in actual bondage, comfort zones, experimenting to see what works best and what doesn't and even of thinking up scenes to do with each other. I want to make those elements apparent for both since Velia is still relatively 'fresh' on the scene and Alatha isn't used to the concept of size play being actually attainable. Its actually more fun to write about the planning behind their scenes and the thought processes behind them and what they want to do than the scenes themselves!
I haven't actually read that comic though it sounds like something I might want to consider peeking at!
Hope to keep your interest with the chapters to come!
[Report This]Date: July 05 2015 10:46 PM Title: Working Through The Bad
I knew the dramatic outburst was probably coming soon, still kinda cought me off guard the way she saw her on TV. I kinda figured that Alatha was doing things far away from the city to avoid conflict with Velia. She'd rather be gone for weeks away from Velia than do something nearby where they could potentialy have to fight again.
That fight between the characters and the following anguish from Velia and the resoulution was very executed. I'd been wondering if Alatha would be the one to cave or Velia. Alatha seems very strong willed, but also is getting closer to Velia than shes probably been with any of her partners in a long time.
I'm torn between wanting to see more sexy dominant fighting from Alatha and wanting to see a happier ending to this story. Overall good plot development chapter I'm sure there will be lots more sexy times to come :D
Author's Response:
Ah, that puts me at ease. Here I was a bit afriad it might come off as more forced.
As far as Alatha caving... I wouldn't say that exactly. Depends on if Velia can come up with something that holds her interest as she does rather enjoy fighting.
Oh, I still have quite a few ideas in regards to more sexy times/GTS related things. Rest assured of that.