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Reviewer: mrcool Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2015 11:22 AM Title: The Nature of Powers and Submission

Really love this story. I hope you continue to add chapters.  Would love to see Alatha get more cruel and keep her little captive under her feet more, especially inside those boots for an extended period of time

Reviewer: combine45 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2015 4:26 PM Title: The Nature of Powers and Submission

Ooh you answered a question I had without me even realizing I had it. So Velia can shrink other people if she is touching them when she shrinks maybe? It will be interesting to see how Velia functions as a dom and how Alatha does with being shrunken. She's not used to it like Velia so I could see it being very frightening for her.

Nice to see the little touch of Alatha having tears welling up at hearing how much Velia trusts her at the end there. That chapter had a great mix of size play and regular size sexy S&M stuff.



Author's Response:

No doubt, for Velia its old hat but for Alatha its most certainly not! The world can be rather terrifying when tiny, as countless stories on here outline!

Figured I'd try a mix in this chapter and see how it would go, pleased to see it went over well.

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