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Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

I am really enjoying the story so far. I can't wait to see where it goes. As for mistakes, there are only a couple spelling ones here and there. Nothing too bad.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2015 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

This princess things seems kind of fishy if you ask me...As for the Giantesses, they seem relentless and don't care in any way about their prey, in fact they don't even seem to address or even talk to them at all. I wonder if they even have some form of civilization? As of now they all seem like bands of pirates going around killing and pilaging any humans they come across. I wonder how Cindy ended up different?

Maybe it was that she was still young when Dagan found her, and he practically raised her himself? If that's the case then Giantesses being evil are more a nurture rather then nature thing. Meaning that if someone was to raise one from very young they could influence them to behave differently...Great chapter! I'm really looking forward to updates!

Also as a side note, I noticed that you're specifically calling them "Giantesses". Does that mean there are no male giants? If so then how do they reproduce? I'm guessing they need human males but maybe I'm offpoint there, I wonder if you'll address this at some point?

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