Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15 2015 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

Damn, John got cooked in there! It's like they baked him last night.

Elizabeth better give a bath also, not just a few drops of water. I bet he stinks too.

"Purity" - aka a virgin. Got it. Purity sounds more like a goddess term so good word choice.

I'm pretty sure Simone and Elizabeth know it's not Dustin that peeked on her. Blake is dead, they have John. Dustin is not a virgin anymore, which leaves Charles. I don't think she had any doubt that it was Charles.

I think it's funny that Simone is like "unless Dustin is not the only virgin." Well he's not anymore. Lol. Then she says, "I may have been peeped by Charles." Of course you did. You're just acting like it's not obvious.

Also, if Simone is downstairs, in the kitchen, how the heck does she know where Charles is? He could've peeked from any angle for her to sense purity. I bet there are numerous places to hide.

Good thing Dustin is with Charles. Otherwise, Simone would've had a good chance on finding him.

Now if Simone returns and her prediction on where Chalres is hiding is false, then she will either think that Charles avoided her, or likely that she will think that Dustin has helped Chalres and that's why he moved.

Man, I'm all in for Charles to become a hero in this story, but I really want to see Simone capture Charles. He thought that being stuck in Simone's underwear was horrible. I wonder if his mindset will change soon.

Dustin can try all he wants. Using all of his evasive maneuvers, there is no way that he can stop Simone from claiming her prize of Charles. It's bound to happen.

Speaking of Dustin, I wonder what happens when he gets caught. Will Simone take extra precautions on keeping Dustin trapped, or will she respect Dustin's craftiness and give him some slack? Anything can happen.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2015 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

Dustin is one of those guys that if you wanted to keep him prisoner, you need to keep him at a high tech facility.

A bird cage is nothing to him. He just busted out of there like he wanted to elude the giantesses the whole time.

So John is still inside Simone? Wow! And the girls are sleeping!?? I don't think John can sleep through that, let alone be able to breathe.

So are these guys going to make a slingshot/bow and arrow/grappling hook all in one device? That's genius! A weapon and a tool.

Haha, 2 hours for two guys to straighten a paper lip. That just sounds funny.

Charles just fell asleep. I wonder if he wakes up in a new location. :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey tom, yeah Dustin is a restless spirit and he may need a leash, hmm, I think that appears in a different story I'm working on X-). I'll have it so john is able to get an arm out so he can at least breathe through a 'hot ass' night, :)

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2015 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

Hoo boy! Dustin's back in the game! :D
Too bad in doing so he's probably forfeited his ranking as favorite pet to pet in need of punishment. Not sure if his clever wiles will save him a second time upon capture :P

But at least Charles is glad to see him. Though he doesn't seem as fond of the girl's uses for their captives? I say he shouldn't knock it till he tries it, right? xD

 

-also incase you're wanting to be alerted on any slight typo's there was one that stuck out a bit in the first paragraph section:

Pausing, he listened to the sounds of the women breathing, hoping and praying one of them did get up suddenly.

You meant to say 'didn't' right?   Not trying to be a grammar nazi or anything, that one just kinda stuck out to me as a contradiction to what Dustin was trying to achieve while escaping ^_^;

Author's Response:

Thanks Alman01, I appreciate your vigilance catching the typo, you're right it is definitely the opposite of what he wanted and it's funny, i think i've edited and then re-read and I'm like crap, another one? :P

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2015 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 13

Alright! Well looks like John got his comuppance and so swiftly too. I guess Dustin's the favorite for the two of them so far... though it's hard to tell what's really a punishment in this game xD

But better yet, Charles! He's doing it! Could he become the unsung hero of this story? :D
He definitely deserves points for trying, now :) 
Not a clue what he's gonna be able to do withthe pin and hair-tye but whatever the case I bet he gets to be declared the winner of this game. He deserves it after all ^_^ 

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 13

As usual, loved it!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2015 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh man is it bad that I suspected that the opperator was gonna turn out to be one of the two ladies? xD
Suspected it when the opperator was described as a woman, became 90% certain after the steady buildup of the operator trying to get John's exact location xD

Oh well, looks like underdog Charlie may well get to be the last little guy standing (in a manor of speaking ^_^;)
Here's hoping he wins a happy ending for his success! :D 

Author's Response:

It was either that or have Simone scent him out, but either way, it was John's turn. Next installment will have a nice twist, :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 12

Yep, John is right. One patrol car is not enough.

Haha, I can't blame the operator for giggling. I mean, if someone said that they were in a pocket of some jeans, then I would think they are crazy despite how convincing they try to be.

Probably should send in a seat team as well. Even that might not be enough.

I don't get that last part with Simone. Might need to clarify that. Did Simone have Charles's phone and is impersonating him as she calls 911? Is she going to call them and tell the cops that there is nothing going on? I think that would raise suspicion instead. She better choose her words carefully. Oh, what am I saying. She probably wants more cops, so more toys to play with.

I still wonder why she called 911 at the same time as John. Did she sense him calling, so she called 911 as well to give the police other info? I know Simone is up to something, and I'm kinda excited.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Alman01 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 11

Gotta say this is by far one of the most enticing and interesting cat&mouse themed Giantess stories I've read in a long while :)
The way you've written in each tiny's characters to influence their decisions on surviving this game against an interestingly crafty pair of witches makes this a very gripping story :)

Dustin's my favorite character. But I also hope Charles gets some enjoyment before meeting his fate. He really seems like the sort that could use a break like Dustin ya know? ^_^; 

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to share a review. We'll see how the fates of the little ones unfold. You got to kind of feel for Charles at least just a little :)

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2015 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

Nice chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

Really liking it so far. Continiue with the updates!

Author's Response:

Thanks, balancing a handful of stories is proving to be a challenge, but I will do what i can to keep the interest alive, :)