Date: September 03 2015 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 27: False Apology
Wow. I loved this update. The psychological aspect of it made it even better.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 26: Dreaming isn't Always Good
"Insanely jealous" doesn't even _begin_ to describe Dr. Hiroshi's state of mind.
Suitably scary cliff-hanger!
Date: August 31 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 26: Dreaming isn't Always Good
Dream about her? Wow!
Maternal genes be like...
Date: August 31 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 25: Bath Time
Wow!
[Report This]Date: August 30 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 25: Bath Time
Yeesh! Reminds of that blonde first grade teacher from the now-classic "Shrunken Student."
[Report This]Date: August 29 2015 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 24: I'm in Prison
And when the bath is over, his chances of regaining his freedom will no doubt go down the drain with the water.
[Report This]Date: August 28 2015 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 23: Forceful Affection
He didn't honestly think it would be THAT easy? Did he?
Date: August 27 2015 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 22: I Want to Leave
Wow. One heck of a chapter for plot building.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 22: I Want to Leave
In other stories similar to this, the start of the next chapter would have him forcibly shrunken even smaller. Just right for occupation of a bird cage or hamster cage!
But, I have a hunch your story is going to be far from similar. ;-)
[Report This]Date: August 24 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 21: That's Why I Chose You
The funny thing is. That if I had no family and friends, I could enjoy this new life with this maybe interesting character. But he has a wife who's worried about him and that changes the situation.
Date: August 23 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 21: That's Why I Chose You
He is The Chosen One.
All bow down to the man who has been pulled away from all of modern society's problems, if only to deal with bigger ones.
Interesting chapter. In a good way :D.
[Report This]Date: August 23 2015 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 21: That's Why I Chose You
I was going to make a half-serious joke about Dr. Hiroshi having an "Oedipus comprex." But, that would probably sound too racist. So, I'll just have to settle for giving this chapter five stars.
Date: August 20 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 20: Memories with a Side of Bread
1) Nice to see another update.
2) I agree with what Carycomic says.
3) Definitely interested to see what happens next with the doctor and our protagonist.
4) Is the protagonist going to get any smaller?
Author's Response: Definitely will get smaller at some point. I have the way he does planned out but it's not going to happen right away.
[Report This]Date: August 20 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 20: Memories with a Side of Bread
Yeah, right! Keep him safe from everything...but her.
This is the most disturbing-yet-riveting tale I've read here, in a long time. Sort of like Edgar Allen Poe meets Miyazaki anime.
Date: August 18 2015 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 19: Don't Be Scared
Loving the buildup here!
[Report This]Date: August 18 2015 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 19: Don't Be Scared
Well now I'm scared.
[Report This]Date: August 18 2015 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 19: Don't Be Scared
Wow. Just---plain---WOW!
[Report This]Date: August 15 2015 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 18: He's Still Not Home
Hoo-boy!
Becky's husband never came home? That can mean only one thing. Doctor H has shrink-napped him to her place! Meaning my suspicions about poor Becky being in cahoots with her have been dead wrong, all along.
Diabolically brilliant plot twist!!
Date: August 15 2015 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 18: He's Still Not Home
So emotional. But overly attached gf much?
[Report This]Date: August 15 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 18: He's Still Not Home
Man, I just can't get enough of this story!
I feel proud of myself because I called that the doctor took him home (Even though it was pretty obvious).
I was also so bummed and check constantly to see when the next chapter of this would come out.
Great story so far! Still wondering just how long the story will be, and then if they'll be any kind of sequel to it.
Anyways! Loving this story and hope to see more daily updates in the future!
-JJ
Author's Response:
My apologies forthe delays. A lot going on withmoving and whatnot. But I'm gonna try to get back to daily updates starting tomorrow.