[Report This]Date: January 24 2021 1:54 PM Title: The List
I'm glad you decided to continue this story. A bunch of potential suitors to a small prince is a surprisingly good way to introduce many different characters in short stories. A bit disappointed with Princess Elrina Myssia would've been pretty interesting to see what else she could've tried doing to the prince. Like try putting him inside her shoe or trying to be a bit meaner to him by making him clean her feet (Sorry into feet). Anyways hopefully you continue this amazing story. (Please add another chapter to Elrina's story).
Date: January 07 2021 9:16 PM Title: The List
Hey, I really like your story, it inspired me to do something similar about a prince. I'll put what I have done on deviantart here (https://www.deviantart.com/dudeduderson2000/art/A-Prince-s-Adventure-Part-I-Jasmine-855344395). I put a link on the da page to your story, anyway keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Heyo, left a comment on the DA page there. Always happy to hear when my stuff inspires folks!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2020 7:20 AM Title: The List
It's back °-°
Author's Response:
Surprised people would still follow this one of my older works. Please to know people are still enjoying it though!
[Report This]Date: March 26 2020 3:53 PM Title: The List
So glad to seeing this continued. I'll take this chance to finally put a review here.
This story is so well-written that it's an incredible pleasure to read. It's one of the most original stories I've seen in my ten years of being here and this way of story-telling synergizes so well with the size-fetish that it never gets old. You've done a wonderful job on making each character feel unique and different. I in particularly like the backreferences to the previous characters the protagonist visited in the past.
I hope that we also occassionally get to see or hear from old characters. For example, I'm wondering if the twins ever realized what Erik had done, given that they'd probably scheme against him if they ever found out.
But anyway, good job, the only way I can sum up this review is that it has been an absolute pleasure to read and I hope you don't get burnt out so soon writing this.
Author's Response:
I'm happy to be continuing it. Its easily one my most can be picked up and continued whenever stories since by its nature, the visits can be wildly different from one another. Helps when you've been away from it for a while.
Oh I'm certain older characters will be making appearances here or there, there are a couple that will most certainly pop their heads up in future.
Anyway, thanks for the review and glad you are enjoying!
Date: January 22 2017 9:00 AM Title: The List
Well, at least you were honest. Brutally honest, honest nonetheless. I completely understand your reason for protecting the rights your own work.
Of course, it would be nice to know when you'd restart it. I actually wrote a fan chapter, during the time I was waiting for your reply. And I understand if you can't give me a specific answer, but it would be nice to know.
Date: January 17 2017 7:36 PM Title: The List
Ok Hi!
Listen, it's been a while since I've been on your page but I am begging you: finish Toxicity.
It's gotten really intense and I cannot bear it to be left open-ended. And when I say finish, I mean proper resolution, either through liberty or death.
If you lost all interest, could you possibly surrender the rights to me or someone who wants to finish it? I know that is asking a lot but if you have any idea as to how this was going to end I could write up a draft and email it to you. If not, that is fine... sort of.
I mean no disrespect. I really just this to be concluded!
Author's Response:
Heyo. So. Didn't quite expect people to like probably one of my worst stories haha.
I am a tad strapped for time in recent days. Like. A lot. So writing, when it happens is sporadic if blissfully glorious. Its also on things I'm generally feeling at the time. I do things, because I want to do them. I also write things because I want to write them. No real obligation or 'or else' to it. Not being paid to do it after all. Its simply a hobby.
Toxicity, I could see myself finishing if for no other reason than resolution, but it wouldn't be quick. I also can't promise satisfaction with the ending I've in mind. I'm not a happy endings kinda guy. Should be obvious reading most of my stuff.
Now that also said, in the vein of me possibly finishing this I'd not want to surrender the rights. Last think I want is someone to just butcher the whole thing, yeah its not my best. But its something I wrote. Now that said, Toxicity is in the Shadowrun verse, so not as though I can claim to own it haha. Since its essentially fanfiction. But no, couldn't see myself granting my blessing to someone continuing it. I also can't say for certain that conclusion would come in a timely manner.
But hey, nothing stopping ya from doing it anyway despite what I say. So if you want to write fanfiction of fanfiction, that is your choice there. I don't mean to sound rude if I do, just giving you my honest and complete answer.
Date: December 14 2016 3:06 PM Title: The List
Amazing story, INWTB please continue it.
Date: September 04 2015 10:01 PM Title: The List
This is one of the best I've ever read. I came for the smut, stayed for the well written characters and fun plot. Please continue!
[Report This]Date: August 21 2015 8:09 AM Title: The List
Love the setting and the character portrayals. They feel so much more alive than what you read in most other stories here.
Also hoping our hero will manage to visit all one hundred prospects.;)
Btw hoping to see some dark elves or even somewhat civilized humanoid races like Orcs too.
Also maybe you can make some prospects Queens themselves , who haven´t married yet and are somewhat older than the young princesses we had so far? Would imho add some further diversity to the future "cast".
Author's Response:
Well thats the plan. One hundred is quite a lot but shouls be doable haha.
Hmm, good suggestions there. I'm sure both races can be penciled in, was already playing around with the idea of Dark Elves for a bit after all. The one hundred prospects bit gives me quite a bit of flexibility to play with.
I hadn't thought about Queens, though I can see how that might shake things up a bit. Putting it on the list for possible future scenarioes.
Date: August 18 2015 1:22 AM Title: The List
Man, this is definitely some of the higher-quality writing this site has to offer. The characters and scenarios are interesting in more than just sexual ways, too! Altogether awesome, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you, good to know the characters are interesting even with the limited time that is had with some.
Date: August 18 2015 12:37 AM Title: The List
Well that turned out pretty well, not sure if its all downhill from here.
Author's Response:
Pretty sure Erik doesn't know himself, the whole thing has been up and down for the most part!
[Report This]Date: August 09 2015 3:29 PM Title: The List
Wonderful story as always. I don't see how this is going to end up well for Erik. Hopefully we see some gentle or mini giantess action soon.
Author's Response:
Oh, I'd say either one or the other should be occuring sooner or later. ;)
[Report This]Date: August 09 2015 12:57 PM Title: The List
Politics does, indeed, make strange bedfellows.
Author's Response:
Very, very strange.
Date: August 08 2015 7:15 AM Title: The List
Thats not sibling love, that is Lannister level!
Author's Response:
I did consider having them be a pair of pasty blondes actually... Before the same comparison smacked me in the head.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 12:18 PM Title: The List
I'm really loving this concept, and all of the lovely ladies introduced so far. To be honest, I was a bit turned off when you called our hero a narcissist to begin with, but I'm glad he's more of a kid at heart who's in over his head than a pompous ass. Not to say I don't find pompous asses getting what's coming to them unsatisfying, but how you've written him is wonderful.
When it comes to suggestions, how about a non-human suitor as a change of pace? I may be cutting the feet lovers short here, but I'd love to see a lamia princess under the spotlight. They're known to be very passionate about their feelings, after all. Perhaps she has a cute accent and little concept of human culture, and our little hero gets up close and personal with her race's traditions.
In any case, keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
Narcissist might have been a tad much on my part though he certainly has his moments. I figured having him be completely unsympathetic would make the story less enjoyable.
Hmm... I actually hadn't thought of a lamia but I think it might be interesting to work with! I'll add it to the list as a possible future encounter. Could actually be fun to write him dealing with a snake woman.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2015 9:40 AM Title: The List
There is so many different combinations that you could use with the remaining 94 princesses. It's going to be interesting to see where this ends up going. Hopefully we get to see some mini giantess action going on when he meets a princess who is two to three times bigger than him because of a curse or something.
Author's Response:
97, Erik still has a looong way to go before he's even past the ten mark. As to the rest, guess we'll see further down the list!
Date: August 07 2015 9:07 AM Title: The List
Love your stuff. You do a wonderful job with characters, and hit all the right buttons. Really enjoying Lea so far especially. It's a good approach as well, and I'm really enjoying the creative framing device you're using here. I'm more of a growth guy, but I'm having a lot of fun with your stories which is a very good sign.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It makes for an interesting project I can just pick up and roll with, glad others are enjoying it!
[Report This]Date: August 06 2015 7:01 AM Title: The List
This is an amazing story so far! I can't wait to see the next princess.