[Report This]Date: August 11 2015 10:12 AM Title: Prospects #4&5 The Liolis Twins Pt. 3
Moral of the chapter?
"Incest is most definitely NOT best!"
Date: August 08 2015 5:15 PM Title: Prospects #4&5 The Liolis Twins Pt. 3
I'm continuing to adore the work you're doing here. There was a great mix of really satisfying action that ultimately led to a surprising moment of character reflection. It was nice to see the prince actually succeed over one of his suitors for the first time, as much of a jerk as he can be.
It might just be that I've read enough macro fiction on the site that I'm semi-jaded, but I'm more or less at the point where any new stories have got to really grab me immediately to make me want to keep going along further than a few chapters, and this is one of the few that I immediately want to read the new material when it's posted. Again, very strong show.
Author's Response:
Thanks again, Jack! I'm just really writing them as they come. Writing smaller self contained stories within the scope of a larger one is actually rather fun honestly, lets one focus more on the action since you've got to keep each encounter to at most 3-4 parts to keep things fresh consistantly.
Glad to know its grabbed you, hopefully the chapters to come keep you just as invested!