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Reviewer: angelus288 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2021 1:14 AM Title: Prospect #9 Duchess Iona Vastar Pt. 2

I'm glad you continued the story. My only complaint with the chapters is that I wish Erik was used as a footstool for the fairies longer. 



Author's Response:

Happy to hear you enjoyed and thats fair I'd say, probably could have lingered a bit there.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2020 11:10 AM Title: Prospect #9 Duchess Iona Vastar Pt. 2

Great chapters focusing on Erik and Iona here.

It was interesting seeing him with an older/mature woman. That definitely shook the dynamic up a bit. As well as the fact she shrank him even smaller than his normal height, so he was truly a bug before her. 

You handled her character well, she really viewed him as a plaything or toy for her amusement, the way she cut him off by flexing her toes and with that action alone proved her dominance over him so completely to the point he realized he had no choice but to clean her toes and that his arguments meant nothing to her, his words having no effect or consequence. 

The inshoe description and scenes were also well done, you really described the scene well. 

I am so happy you're once again writing for this story, I hope your muse keeps up :D



Author's Response:

Thanks! Happy to hear you enjoyed it and yeah, I'm one that has grown to appreciate more confident and mature ladies in size. Certainly has a lovely spice to it.

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