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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

P.S.---for the lurkers who don't know what I'm talking about? Ayla Ranzz is the real birth-name of Lightning Lass. I think Dreamtales was the victim of random association. Lightning Lass can generate bio-electricity. Just like Ororo Munro of the X-men, whose code-name "Storm" is also the maiden name of Mrs. Susan Richards of the Fantastic Four.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 25 2007 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

1999??! And, STILL no part two? That, plus the mix-up in Lightning Lass' nomenclature, earns this a six.

Not bad! But, a whole lot of room for improvement.

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