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Reviewer: ThickBeast Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2023 6:01 AM Title: A Tasty Meal

Damn Jessica is one cruel mastermind. Her, Jennifer, Marissa, the Softball and Basketball girls all have their own personal foot boy. For me this'll be great, for Adam really feel bad. 

Should have begged Ms. Pritchard to stay with her, under her foot and that you'll change under her guidance lol. If you made a compelling genuine argument she'd agree. Better the crazed school girls 

Reviewer: Drex Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 6:08 AM Title: A Tasty Meal

Oh cool! Was pleasantly surprised when I saw the new reviews for this and checked it out! Poor, poor Adam. Nice to see Jessica back again for round 2!

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2016 8:09 AM Title: A Tasty Meal

Glad to see you came back to this story, keep it up!

Reviewer: Seabee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2016 8:05 AM Title: A Tasty Meal

Great work, and extremely well-written!  I love this story!

Reviewer: Gtsbootlover Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2016 10:14 PM Title: A Tasty Meal

Glad you continued this! great read!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2016 7:30 PM Title: A Tasty Meal

Excellent.

 

The only way I'd change is make the tiny a girl and possibly have the team torture the teacher too.

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