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Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2022 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

Why does he answer everything? He said "I don't want to answer this" a single time. Or is there some world rule. Also if his little sister calls him little brother is that a lie?

Reviewer: jbruce19 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 13 2018 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

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Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2017 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

Thanks for Answering. I guess i got curious at what kind of relationship Tom and Linda have since we only had two chapters with Linda and Tom together, but i really liked what we did get. Especially in comparison to his relationship with his siblings. Like while Linda has him eat from her feet, she doesn't make eating as difficult as Tom siblings do.

 

And really looking forward to the Ms.Evans thing!



Author's Response: I appreciate the thought you put into your responses to my stories especially with regard to characterization etc. Definitely helps motivate writing a continuation of this. Linda will definitely have more time with Tom in the sequel.

Reviewer: wireman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2016 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

I really love this story! Brilliant pacing and likable character, no different from most of your work. Cant wait for more!



Author's Response: Thanks very much. I do plan to write a sequel to this sooner rather than later.

Reviewer: KushKing Signed [Report This]
Date: December 22 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

This has been a fantastic story my friend! Can't wait to see the sequel. Please tell me this new character Samantha will show up in the sequel. I happen to have a think for goth chicks ha-ha. Cheers!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2015 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

I have to agree with Carycomic.
Now it gets very unrealistic. There is no way that the characters around him never lie often or have to admit to their torture when asked by others.

 



Author's Response:

Well, it didn't really sound to me like that was what Carycomic was saying, but this is just how this world operates, believe in it or not.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

The funny part is, that the environment pretends to hate Tom. But they all like to play or torture him in his shrunken form. What if you took that 'addicted fun' away from them. Their lives would be empty.

 



Author's Response:

It would definitely hurt a lot of these people if they didn't have liars to play with.

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2015 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

Love it!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

100th review!

Well, the first part of my review seems more likely to be true so I believe that will happen next chapter. He is getting an after school lesson in detention, but probably not by being sat on. (That would be awesome if she sat on him again.)

Author's Response:

Maybe, maybe not...

Reviewer: KushKing Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2015 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

Great chapter man.I love heathersplayful but devious nature.Will we see more of her in the next chapter and will she be putting tom anywhere besides her mouth?



Author's Response:

Thanks. There will be a little more Heather to come, though she won't be putting him anywhere else in this particular story.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2015 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

That aside about being crumb sized and trapped in saliva-laden gum under an unaware girl's shoe was phenomenal! Would love to get more of that!



Author's Response:

Hehe. Maybe in a future story.

Reviewer: Isaac Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 24 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

I have to say, this is an incredibly unique and well executed concept. I love your work dude, and this has got to be one of my favorites, so I'm excited for more to come!



Author's Response:

Hey thanks. More is coming soon.

Reviewer: bottleofwater2003 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2015 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

Absolutely amazing!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Maniac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2015 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

I really like the way you write. And I draw a distinction between that and saying that I like your story (though I definitely do like it!): even outside of the fetish aspect, I think you've got a good style.

 

As for the particulars, the latest chapter is great! I've been eyeing those micro and nano tags and wondering when they were going to kick in. I'll definitely be impatiently keeping an eye out for the next chapter (what I'd give for Ms. Evans to find him now!).



Author's Response:

Thanks very much; I'm glad you like my writing. And yep, the micro/nano tags are finally coming into play.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2015 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

I accidentally hit submit.

Continuing off that. Instead of stating another false truth, he could say "this is not a good time". "I shall not discuss those things" "that was private", or some thing similar.

We know Tom is a consistent liar, but does he have to be that bad at it?

You know, I want to see a scene where someone questions Tom, and Tom says the truth, so accurately, that others think it's a lie. They wait for Tom to shrink, and then Tom is like "told ya". I think that will be a good addition to this story.

So Tom is a quarter inch. Can't do much now. How will he get to his next class. Jordan or Heather? Who will be ride with?

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

He's able to do those things on occasion, though most of the time the lies come as a bodily impulse, so he can't really control it. It's like a reflex. Heather may have some ideas about how to transport Tom around.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

Man, the offhand recollections of suffering under sweaty gym clothes etc would make a fine chapter itself. Would love to see more of that,maybe even at a tinier size. The mention of in-shoe is also exciting :)



Author's Response:

Hehe. We might see those offhand recollections, though part of what makes them interesting to me is that such events make up those casual conversations. But there will be more unpleasant situations to come, either way.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

Ms Evans is interesting....



Author's Response:

She certainly is.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

@Carycomic, haha. Don't make it sound like a bad thing. :)

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

It also sounds like he won't be able to walk on his own when the punishment is over(At least not right away), since he mentions his limbs going to sleep. 



Author's Response:

Hehe. Probably not.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2015 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar

I agree with Carycomic. This school is not for Tom. He needs to find people who are suitable of helping him.



Author's Response:

In this world, school choice won't really help him; no matter where he goes, he's basically a pariah to at least someone.

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