[Report This]Date: November 24 2015 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 17: Run Tom Run
Since it's established that anyone can shrink if they lie, any chance we'll see someone besides Tom shrink? I can't help but hope Alaina gets a taste of her own medicine at some point.
Author's Response:
Tom is the only one who will shrink in this story, but I plan to make this into a series.
Date: November 23 2015 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 17: Run Tom Run
This is an awesome piece of work I truely have none I prefer at this point in time, excellent job
Author's Response:
Good to hear! Glad you like.
Date: November 23 2015 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 17: Run Tom Run
You're doing amazingly well, it's got simple yet descriptive language; some really strong plot development (in terms of how characters feel and interact with Tom).
My biggest question if i had any qualm with this, is that i can't see where it's going; it might still be too early in the story, but it seems to be very repetitive in terms of how all the angrier characters are like "you're small, that angers me" and then proceeds with otherwise great depictions of punishment; so i guess what i'm asking is what are your plans for this story? will we see this godess of truth?
Past that, it's one of the best stories i've read.
Author's Response:
Glad you're liking it. We're actually much closer to the end than the beginning here. I hope it doesn't seem too repetitive; every character has a slightly different reaction to Tom's actions, even if they all enjoy playing with him to some extent. The last chapter will give a better picture of the point of all this.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 17: Run Tom Run
A pleasant surprise to see you write one of my favorite aspects. Though my pity and sympathy for our protagonist in this peculier context didn't make it easy to enjoy this chapter. Humiliation is one thing, but blatant disregard is another. Something about skewed senses of justice that go unpunished really grinds my gears. If that's what you were shooting for, you did a terrific job.
I am a little confused as to where you're going with this story, however. Is Tom supposed to learn the error of his ways through these tortures, or is everyone else? Or is it simply his fate to endure these fetishistic activities for good, as that is his place in this bent universe?
Great chapter as usual.
Author's Response:
You're definitely not meant to feel affection for Alaina. I like frustrating readers with the tiny's treatment. Admittedly this story is servicing the fetish more than the narrative, but the final chapter will help explain the point of all this (and give a hint at where things are headed in later stories).
[Report This]Date: November 23 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 17: Run Tom Run
Ah, poor guy...
Author's Response:
Poor guy indeed.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2015 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 17: Run Tom Run
With an older sister like Alaina, he's better off falling out of her armpit and fending for himself. :-(
Author's Response:
It's possible that crossed his mind.