[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 2: Breakfast in Shoe
Timescribe would've loved these first two chapters.
Date: August 31 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
Tom baker? I Didn't took you for a Doctor Who Fan. interesting premise! why no one has hired you to be a published aurhtor or any studio hires you still bogles the mind. Will you write an alternate Ant-Man Sequal?
Author's Response:
I've actually never seen Doctor Who, so hopefully I'm not sullying the name of some beloved character. I'm not sure I'd be the one to write an Antman fan fic, but I'd certainly enjoy seeing one that used Evangeline Lilly more effectively.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 2: Breakfast in Shoe
I do like how different each of your mother/son parings are.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I try to vary them all somewhat.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: Breakfast in Shoe
Wow, this chapter was fun! I ate oatmeal of my mother's toes. It may sound disgusting, but trust me, it could be a lot worse. (Ok, that was a lie. How tall am I?)
My mom thinks that this will help me stop lying. Nope. I enjoy her feet much more than she thinks. Only the heat radiating from her slipper kinda bugs me. Oh, and the smell, but I get used to that.
Next up, you guys will meet my siblings, yes the truth tellers that I'm kind of jealous of. Sure, they are normal sized, but I bet it sucks to have to tell the truth all the time. Sometimes, I use that to my advantage and demand them to tell the truth. One problem. I'm not exactly the smartest of individuals and most of the time, they outsmart me.
Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy this tale about me, because we are just getting started!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
If you're planning to review any future chapters in this first person style, you'll find yourself saying some very peculiar things about yourself.
Date: August 31 2015 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 2: Breakfast in Shoe
interesting story idea. Looking forward! Is it your 1st story with nano size by the way?
Author's Response:
I've used nano size in other stories, but not often.
Date: August 31 2015 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 2: Breakfast in Shoe
Great start! I hope to see some boob action. Hopefully, Tom will soon find himself trapped in the bra of a large-breasted giantess.
Author's Response:
It's definitely possible.
Date: August 31 2015 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 2: Breakfast in Shoe
Can't wait to see more of this strange world and 'unholy sinner'.;)
Author's Response:
There will be more very soon.
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
Another great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: August 30 2015 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
By the way, did the mom not realize he lied about the food because he didn't want to hurt her feelings or does she not care either way?
Author's Response:
She would've preferred he tell the truth even if it hurt her (especially because she would've figured it out either way). Truth is just that important in this world.
[Report This]Date: August 29 2015 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
If even white lies can make you shrink, i find it surprising his parents don't occasionally shrink too.
It's probable that they do shrink a tiny bit on occasion, but they're much better at hiding it. Tom doesn't really have a way to conceal going down to a matter of inches.
Author's Response:
Date: August 29 2015 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
Love your stories, especially ones with the in-shoe aspect. After I read the first chapter I couldn't help but think there must be no politicians in this universe, or they are all the size of atoms by this point. Anyways, keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! The government is surely a very different beast in this world.
Date: August 29 2015 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
I hope you add some booty and ass gas lol!! Other than that the story is awesome so far! Good start and I can't wait until the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
There will be some butt content, but I'm not into writing gas stuff.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
*crosses finger for another bratty sister*
Author's Response:
*winks*
Date: August 27 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
There's a delightful sadism in concepts that both give agency to people while punishing them for their own inability to manage it.
Very much looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
That balance is exactly what I'm going for with this story. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
What an interesting and unique concept! This story already seems like it's going be a lot of fun. I'm happy I get to read one of your stories from the beginning and not start much later in the series like I usually do. I'll definitely be looking out for this one.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing. I hope you like what's to come.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
Sweet! Another story with the main character as Tom. I can't wait to see what happens to me in this story. :)
The start is incredible. We learn about Tom's problem and how it relates to a version of what happens to pinnochio, but this time, you shrink. I like it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hehe. Well, "you'll" be put down quite a bit in this story.
Date: August 27 2015 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1: World's Biggest Liar
It already sounds funny and entertaining. ;)
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it!