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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

"Alright Clint, what's your move?"

"We need you to....." Sam was cut off. An explosion inside the building occurred and blinded Sam in the light. As he regained his vision, he couldn't believe his eyes.

The woman on the floor, what's her name? Ah yes, Elayne. Sam saw her standing above the building, no she was in the building....it can't be!

Elayne looked around and saw that she was standing in the bathroom, a dead corpse by her feet. 'Serves him right' she thought.

All of a sudden bright red lights hit her face. She put her hand to protect her and saw that the hundreds of officers that were surrounding the building are now surround her.

She immediately panicked out of instinct and her legs began pivoting, tearing down the rest of the building.

Sam saw the destruction get near him and yelled "Everyone out, move out of you want to live! Where's Cameron?"

"I think it's too late, Sam" George replied as the wall of the building crumbled and revealed Cameron's motionless body.

"We got to move...now!" Sam repeated.

He felt a buzz in his hand.

"Hey....hey....you alright? What happened? The voice of Jason echoed in Sam's ears. His heartbeat slowed as if a slow motion movie was taking place. He saw debris fly and hit people as Elayne still causing havoc out of fear. This was his moment, the moment where he chooses if he wants to live or to die.

What I just typed was a prediction of what is going to happen next chapter.

I'm really liking this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Time for the stakes to be raised. I see your hostage situation and raise you one girl with the ability to fuck shit up

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

What a perv...

I like the plot building and the way this story is advancing.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Also thanks for the referral on your bio. Very much appreciated!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 31 2015 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 5

I'm rooting for the bad guys but this Cameron dude needs to either get his shit together or he just needs to die. He's very unlikeable. I also like the fact that this is a chess match between the police.
Would be cool if the lieutenant and 'Clint' were on the same team but then again it's nice having a good guy and bad guy being so likeable.

aaron

Author's Response:

Yeah I'm rooting for Sam too. Cameron is a duck and getting stupider by the minute. Stay tuned it is time for some GTS content :)

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