[Report This]Date: September 03 2015 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Whoa. Not only does she possess some kind of magic but she can kick some serious ass. What a badass. And a professional actress to boot. I'm almost certain she's some kind of immortal or a type of goddess because the way she acted letting this just happen naturally until it affected her and she seems so confident(not that a woman with the ability to shrink wouldn't be but she has an heir of superiority I can't quite explain however I find incredibly intriguing).
Also like how she merely embellished when asked where Cameron was.(if I'm reading her right that he went to the bathroom stall to whack it) Sam seemed to believe her immediately because he knows the type of person Cameron is.(which is very perceptive of her)
aaron
PS
Only thing I found confusing was his size(I get you're being intentionally vague) but their seemed to be some discrepancies; like when she first picked him up and dropped him in the toilet(it seemed like he was at least 5") but when he was placed in her panties her seemed much smaller. This could just be me though.
Author's Response:
Yep she is certainly a bad ass she didn't seem fazed at all he was armed just systematically took his toys away before shrinking him. He is between 2.5 and 3 inches in height. She dropped him into the toilet from about 6 inched which seemed like 10 feet to him. My apologies for any confusion. Thank for the read and review!
Date: September 02 2015 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
Whoa. What a twist.
Author's Response:
Had to happen sometime :)
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
I was wondering when the shrinking was gonna happen and as always you outdid yourself :)
Author's Response:
Thank you I wanted to keep people saying "How the hell is he gonna get the shrink on?" :)
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow! That was freaking sexy. I knew this girl was someone special from chapter 1!
Cameron, that bastard, deserved everything he got.
When Cameron asked "who are you?" I wanted the girl to say "a woman. Women today are smarter and can outplay men all the time, like you" she smiled.
If that was her response, then Cameron would never mess with a woman ever again. Then again, shrinking him solves all those problems.
I love how your stories focus's on the front of the panties as the preferred spot to keep these men. It's my favorite spot too. It's sexy and gives control and pleasure to the woman.
I have a feeling that this girl's real name is like "Simone, Elizabeth, Serah, Clarrisa, Angeline", or someone from the "contract". But to be honest, I prefer new names, and I think what you did with the Sophie story was good. You put new names and made it separate from the "contract".
So is this woman going to shrink all the robbers? Or will she call up her friends and let them have a robber too?
While this hostage situation is great, I can't wait for more news on what Cameron is experiencing.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm trying to keep the primary story thread plausible and full of suspenseful tension all the while this young woman is right there.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Another great story, Duggernaut.
"her hoo-hah"? Now, that brings back memories. : )
Author's Response:
Doesn't it :) Thanks for the read and review!