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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 7

Very intriguing indeed. Wonder if Sam is gonna force Blaine(first thing I thought of was David Blaine street magician lol) and Steven to bring the hostages outside with empty guns or something completely different... Whatever the case I'm hooked. Looking forward to see how/if they get outta there and how/if the cops can thwart them.
Really wanna see how Elayne will play into this. Wonder if Sam can manage to get on her good side?

aaron
PS does Elayne have any other powers?(if that's a plot point then disregard)

Author's Response:

Elayne is ALOT more than she appears to be and now her curiosity is aroused, well curiousity and other things, ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2015 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 7

Cop- "Miss, are you ok?"

Elayne-"ah..(she moaned)yes" She smiled at the cop.

Elayne is hot, even though she did basically nothing this chapter, I just can't hide my desire for a chapter dedicated to her.

I wonder why Sam wanted those 2 guys to dress up like the robbers. I'm no hostage expert, so I am really curious of what he plans.

Not much else to say except that the plot continues to thicken.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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