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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 15

Elaine and Kaylee are great. Love the interaction as they look in the dollhouse. I assume that when Elaine gives an order they had better respond quickly. Enjoying the story very much.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

We shall how Sam, who's accustomed to being in charge is now in a position, of shall we say diminished authority. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

A relatively short chapter, but it's a good transition chapter. It went from dramatic robbery to giantess slavery. I like it.

For some reason, I don't like the name Kaylee. It's just not attractive in my opinion. But otherwise, I like her character. She's the giddy school girl type.

Let me guess, Kaylee plays with George and Cameron at the same time. Cameron gets ass and George gets pussy. Meanwhile Elayne plays with one at a time. She starts with Wyatt. She uses him as a show for Sam, trying to tease him by playing with Wyatt. Soon Elayne gets bored and replaces Wyatt with Sam. At first, Sam refuses, but out of nowhere, Sam just all of a sudden explodes with energy, touching her in all of the right places and she orgasms, and when it's over she looks at him and Sam still has a stoic expression on his face. That's my prediction.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Bit of a different start, hostage role reversal now. I know a Kaylee that would absolutely change your opinion, straight up beautiful

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