Reviews For A Longing
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2018 7:06 AM Title: The Run In

Well, even if you don't continue it, this was a great one-shot. And, if it's your literary debut, here, as well? Welcome to the club!

:-)

Reviewer: aknouh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 14 2016 11:34 PM Title: The Run In

awesome

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Date: November 05 2015 12:38 PM Title: The Run In

awesome keep going!

Reviewer: aknouh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 2:40 PM Title: The Run In

keep going, hope her tits get bigger =P

Reviewer: paerslemone Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2015 6:14 PM Title: The Run In

Pretty good. would have liked for it to go a little slower.



Author's Response:

Ok, thank you for the feedback, I will use this to develop my writing in the future.

Reviewer: jonnyjames9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2015 5:53 PM Title: The Run In

Not bad at all, especially considering it's your first story. I would like to see more.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

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