[Report This]Date: October 10 2015 10:47 AM Title: Sammi's Question, and Lucy's Origin
I see... have you ever seen the film Boogie Nights? If not, you should, it's a masterpiece. Anyway, in the film, the main character is a porn star, and his sound editor, played by Phillip Seymour Hoffman, is in love with him. The limited amount of scree time this aspect and character got always made me wish for more, but this could potentially be an outlet.
Maybe you could have Lucy's thing be a subplot to another story, you know? So that you get to stretch your writing talents?
If you need some inspiration, I suggest looking up "Boogie Nights - I'm an idiot."
Author's Response:
I have been making small allusions to it, so there's that. I should probably shunt some more attention onto that detail.
I'll give it a look.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2015 9:45 PM Title: Sammi's Question, and Lucy's Origin
Love these characters. It would be interesting to make a story that was a day in the life of Lucy and Ryan. You could delve into their unrequited passion for Naomi, and how no matter how much they please her, they will never get their prize. It would be interesting.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've had fun developing these characters into people.
I had plans to do a story like that, but scrapped it, for two reasons:
1. Wasn't sure anyone would be interested- that's pretty effin' thinky, even for my work, and as Choreo tells me, this is primarily a site for fetish kicks.
2. Wasn't sure how to organize it. I only start uploading a story if I have a plan for it, and . . . yeah.
[Report This]Date: October 08 2015 8:39 AM Title: Sammi's Question, and Lucy's Origin
I love this story so much!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Did Afroking open a floodgate or something?
[Report This]Date: October 08 2015 1:16 AM Title: Samantha Raleigh
lololololol I was like why is no one reviewing? I thought their was some unspoken thing about not reviewing your stories cause you seem to be lacking in the reviews department.
but all jokes aside ive really enjoyed your Tales of Naomi and the main story as well.question:How tall is Lorelei I cant remember?
Im really looking forward to the next ch as i just realized that this story behind Lorelei was never told so next ch should be good.
ps. Im sure people enjoy your stories but seem to be to lazy to review... also srry I havent reviewed your other stories...I guess im lazy aswell.
Author's Response:
You've got me. Seriously, I was never told about any "don't review Silent-One's shit" rule, and if one exists I hereby negate it.
Thanks! Lorelei stands at 5'8" precisely.
Well, yeah . . . that's kinda why I'm telling it.