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Reviewer: HuzToru Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cool story bro, but make sure to add "" when a character is speaking. Other than that this was a short sweet read.

Reviewer: hunterfury22 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2015 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmm really wish you didn't make another story. The last one was a perfect ending and I didn't like how this one played out. It didn't fit with the others.

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