Reviews For Michael's Story
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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, this is good. I didn't even recognize that it was you writing it! This reminds me of Tom's story with all this rich parents, a sister, a party and things like that.

His cocky behaviour also reminds me of Tom, not to mention his handsome face and physique. Is this guy Tom? Seems like it. Instead of hitting on Janine, he is hitting on Merrile.

I have a feeling that this is like the R rated version of Tom's story so these girls will all be like Janine. It has that dark feeling to it, like bad shit is coming his way.

I wonder if there will by hit milfs in this story, but then again, this isn't Tom's story, haha!

Fantastic start, you have a way of writing good intros.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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