[Report This]Date: November 07 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
I like how you took the good start from Tom's story and put it in this story. I don't blame you. If it works there, it will work here. Besides, I enjoy this scene too.
It's always nice to hear girls talk positively about you, especially your appearance. It helps with self esteem too. Might help Micheal choose which girl he should reach out for help.
His journey in the hall continues. I wonder which girl finds him or at least which room he ventured into.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom thanks for supporting yet another one of my stories it's always great to get your take. There are a lot of similarities between Tom and Michael though I tried to make Michael a little more of a pick and this story will get grittier than the other. (No Injustice reference but I thought about doing it just for your sake :P)