Reviews For Michael's Story
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Reviewer: sarashrunk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

Very Good!!!!!!!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 14

In this chapter, you can't really tell the difference between a mouth and a vagina.

Just think about it. Besides the smell, if you were tiny and inside one of these things, the experience will probably by the same. Kinda.

In addition, we learn about Michael's past with his sister and why she wants to get her revenge.

Good stuff, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 14

Very descriptive. It's if you were there with Michael in Amber's mouth. You can actually feel how dangerous and mindblowing it is to be in there.
What will happen next on his journey.

 

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