Reviews For Michael's Story
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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

Holy crap, so sorry I didnt check this out sooner! The two previous chapters are everything I love about this fantasy, that was awesome.

 

I don't know who the mystery woman in this chapter is (hot chapter as well) but I don't think its Lucy, no way Madison is giving him up yet, if ever. I'm sure her friends want more too!

 

This is a fun story, looking forward to more of this. Im going to have to look up more of your work.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

If this was Madison, then this chapter would be kinda messed up for Michael.

However, I don't think it's Madison or any of the other girls at her house. It must be a new girl (or woman) that is keeping Michael in her panties.

My bet is on Lucie. My second choice would be the assistant lady that Michael tried to hit on in the first chapter.

I still think it's Lucie becuase who else could it be? Not many girls have been introduced to Michael and he also recognizes the stench on these pussies.

Also, Maddison maybe decided to give Michael to Lucie to have him fixed, and Lucie is now going to her grandma's house or something. Or, Lucie happens to be busy and wants to do her activities while keeping Michael with her.

I love chapters like this where a guy is trapped in the panties of someone. However, it would be much sexier to know who was holding him hostage instead. The mysteriousness is good, but I think these chapters are too rare enough to hold on this information.

I really want to know who is this girl, and I love her aggressiveness by pushing Michael into her vagina.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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