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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2016 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow, pretty reckless of Maddy to hand him over to a girl she really doesnt know well. Can't see Mirelle performing in fromt of a crowd like the othe girls did, will she be allowed to leave with him? Very dangerous. 

 

Me likey :)



Author's Response:

I'm pleased you approve. Maddie hasn't turned him over yet as Mirielle was on an errand. Madison wanted to belittle her brother in front of her to lessen him because of the similar things he had done to her in the past.  Stay tuned...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2016 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 16

And we still have no idea which girl has Michael. Well, it doesn't matter now since it looks like Mirielle will gain custody of him next.

I think it's Gennifer playing with Tom right now. Tom wanted to be naughty with her and she granted his wish.

Speaking of naughty, man, I hope Mirielle is extra naughty with Michael. Now Michael will be given to the one he is in love with. Sounds a lot like the situation with Janine.

I think Mirielle would be like Janine but not as agressive as Janine. Also, I think Mirielle won't be as gentle as Lina. A good mix of both seems good in my opinion. And yes, panties! Keep him in there as long as you want Mirielle!

I hope Mirielle takes advantage of the whole situation. I hope she lectures Michael on his stealing incident and then describes what she is going to do with him.

"Michael, you have been a bad boy. Bad boys deserve to be punished. How would you like to be punished Michael? Would you like me to suck on your body with my lips nonstop? Would you like me to put you in my cleavage and squeeze you? You may have a hard time breathing. Or would you like to be tucked inside my panties and pleasure all day during work? You may even enjoy it. I can see your body enjoys it. Mmhmmm... I can feel myself getting all wet. I think it's time we grant your little dick's wish, shall we?" Mirielle picks Michael and let's him dangle from her bra. He looks down and watches her pull the waistband of her panties open, the heat radiating upward and he trembles at the thought of being stuck there all day. Mirielle giggles and Michael falls. He slides right into her gusset and she lets go of her waistband, trapping poor Michael inside. Michael's screams were muffled as Mirielle began massaging herself. "Mmm, that was nice. Time for work." She pats the front of her panties and dresses up, knowing she will have a great day of work.

I love these fantasies. I got a good feeling about Mirielle and I can't wait for the next chapter!

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