Reviews For Michael's Story
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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 18

I like the pool scene, but I'm kinda tired of these girls. It feels different from the other stories where usually I want more action from girls like these.

Love the Jaws reference. That was creative.

I can't wait for Mirielle to return, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

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