[Report This]Date: January 21 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
The action was pretty awesome this chapter. It reminded me of the good stuff from the contract.
However, these girls feel less mature and feel like young teens rather than young adults. It almost makes me cringe at these scenes just like how Michael looks at Madison using him.
Perhaps it was the way you describe the women in your other stories that made me just imagine being with them. You described their bodies, their curves and details that gave me a hint of mature, well developed bodies.
Here, it feels like little girls having their fun with Michael, and I can't get rid of this little girl idea out of my head.
Playfulness is nice, but like Michael, I can't wait for Mirielle, she seems like a breath of fresh air from all these chapters of these girls.
I guess I just want to see some woman with authority. Or some 1 on 1 action. I also miss the times when a woman describes what she will do with a tiny like you did in the contract.
Still a good chapter. I feel like each one is supposed to make me desire Mirielle even more.
I can't wait for the next chapter!