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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2016 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 20

Yes! Yes! Yes! Keep going with this!

I love it when characters imagine naughty stuff. Love the word naughty and the way she used it.

And the descriptions, beautiful! She is in her office, crossed legs, all day doing work while Michael is working down on her! Such a great imagination! I want more characters to think like this. (Like Lina.)

I hope Mirielle gets Michael in the next chapter. I seriously can't wait.

I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad you approve. Have no fear, Mirielle will be there soon to help teach these girls what it means to be a woman, :)

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