Reviews For Michael's Story
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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 22

Finally caught up on this story and I absolutely love it. Really looking forward to more, especially Mirielle's conquest over Mortimer's company.

Really great read.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks Aaron, it may give a whole new meaning to hostile takeover as it applies to this situation  :)

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 22

It kinda sounds like she's planning on taking Michael away. Hence the "responsible adult " line.



Author's Response:

Pretty astute observation, but then what? That's where this might get a little more interesting

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 22

SUSPENSE......IS......KILLING ME!!!

 

Great build up, can't wait!



Author's Response:

Lol, are we there yet? No, not yet. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 22

Mirielle, just don't worry about the way Michael shrank. Just keep thinking about how you are going to use him instead. Use that adult mind of yours to construct some creative sexy ideas that the other girls hadn't even thought was possible.

I'm glad Mirielle chose privacy. It feels more intimate to be alone. I bet Michael enjoys it too.

I just can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 22

As I expected. Mirielle has bigger plans discovering the secret how to shrink people. It's hard to say if Michael is better off with Mirielle or Madison or one of those other girls.
This will be an interesting game.

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