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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2016 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 24

Basically Mirielle just told Madison that you and your friends can't give him in a complicated overdone way.

Half the stuff she said was random and I was wondering where was she going with all these random ideas. Then she finishes it up saying that by all these random ideas I just came up with, Michael is mine for the meantime.

In other words, it's Mirielle time for a while. Yes!

Mirielle said that she knows how to humiliate Michael better than Madison. If that means what she is doing now, then I completely agree. Michael tried so hard to get inside Miriele's panties, and now he is trapped in them. Perfect.

Next time Mirielle has some one on one time with Michael, I hope she just rambles on about all the sexy stuff she will do with him to frighten him. She should tease him too.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2016 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 24

Mirielle must take causion not to anger the gipsies. ;) We still know so little yet of what each girl in this story is really like. After this long, hard, exciting journey will Michael become a better person and who will be the safest person to stay with.

 

 



Author's Response:

Mirielle better be very careful how she approaches the gypsies or she might find herself thrust into a situation bigger than she expected, :O

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