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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 25

I eagerly wait to find out what Mirielle has planned, and how it'll turn out. A number of possibilities, all of them delicious.



Author's Response:

Mirielle is definitely a little more in tune with her sexual needs than the girls just playing. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 25

Oh my rielle! (Get it?)

That was awesome! Your last few chapters in like every story is becoming the best that I have ever seen. Not to mention, creative.

Police scene was superb.

Only driving 20 mph over the speed limit on the highway? That's kinda normal for most people around me. Usually it's like 30 mph faster or less if it's not on a highway.

I bet that cop just wanted to pull her over to get a free date. Ha!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

That's exactly why she was pulled over :) Funny how sometimes seemingly little things can become a life altering event. Might just see this policeman again 

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