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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 29 2016 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 26

2nd paragraph, you said "knees a little shaky" twice.

Alright. Business is done. Now it's time for some fun!

Yes! You pulled the Sophie effect from your other story! I love this stuff an I'm glad you included it into this one.

I can't wait for tonight for Mirielle.

Author's Response:

Thanks fixed it

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