Reviews For Michael's Story
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Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06 2016 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 27

Very interesting, especially for a light chapter. Suggestion: Write a chapter where Michael fantasizes about what he'll never get to do to the girls and Mirielle.



Author's Response:

Hmm might be entertaining after Mirielle is finished with Michael for the night. We shall see

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 05 2016 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 27

These cliffhangers are killing me!

I love the teasing of Mirielle and her way of seducing Michael.

Man, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Lol the cliffhangers are to keep you guessing and coming back

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