Reviews For Michael's Story
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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 13 2016 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 28

First of all, love the chapter title. That makes me want to read more.

Next, while the scene was good, it's the dialogue that made this scene 10/10. Also, their own respective thoughts, both Mirielle and Micheal.

It's interesting to see Mirielle imagine pleasure while Micheal imagines fear. That's my favorite dynamic.

More action and sexy dialogue in the future please. Now that's what makes these chapters awesome.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2016 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 28

I have just read the whole story and same as Tom's Story this one is also excelent.

This chapter I liked the most.

In summary:
Her psychological ramifications of her complete and utter domination sent over the edge me too :-)



Author's Response:

Agreed

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