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Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2016 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 29

If I remember correctly Michael was looking forward to flirt with Mirielle in the first chapter. Be careful what you wish for :-).

I like Mirielle's dominant attitude when Michael is shyly asking about calling to Lucie and she answers she is going to pee and then uses him for her amusement. Only what matters are her whims.

I am very curious what happens when she pulled him out from her pussy. I guess the dental floss will be very slippery so it will be not easy to release him from the dildo ;-)
Maybe she will just not bother with him and after getting what she wanted she will just ignore him and place him together with the dildo back on the nightstand.

I cannot wait how this continues. Thanks for nice story :-)



Author's Response:

Yep Michael was very hot to trot for the objectified Mirielle thinking of things he would or could do to her. Well... he has now come to realize the difference between wanting and having. Thanks for the review. Stay tuned to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 29

Deep down inside, Michael knows that Mirielle might not help him, but this bit of hope is the only thing between him and complete despair.



Author's Response:

Exactly having a sliver of hope may be more painful that realizing there is no hope. Anyway well see whether or not Mirielle will follow through on her promise. Thank for the review

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2016 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 29

I love the dental floss idea. It makes him truly helpless as she plunges him inside her.

I'm still waiting for the "tied or sewn to panties" scene. Maybe Miss Harwood will do that instead. I just think that since it was their "last round", Mirielle will decide to tie him up to her so she can remind him who is boss as she takes him to Lucie.

Great stuff these last two chapters. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Miss Harwood is in the other story but who knows what trials may or may not yet endure. Thanks for the input Tom.

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