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Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2016 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 31

Mirielle is a very smart woman. She knows Michael is an arrogant boy. His ego is hurt. If he is restored to his normal size she would not be able to prevent him to revenge or cause serious problems. Therefore there is no point she is going to help him. I like how she manipulates him by giving him a hope in order to submit her will.

I am very curious how she will interact with Lucie. Maybe they could dominate Michael together to teach him to be more respectful. ;-) Except using him for sex they also could start to train him to obedient e.g. by giving him various ridiculous (humiliating) tasks for their amusement and punishing him if he hesitates to obey --- to break his big ego.

Also in some previous chapter Mirielle thought about having Michael's father in her ass so that his head would stick out. Maybe she could try it first with Michael. Having him there his head out. Completely ignoring his conditions - taking shower, going to pee etc.

I like the term 'ass candy'.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 31

How can she say he's uninjured, when several chapters described him as badly bruised?  I mean, how is she going to explain the bruises? 

 

I also wonder how exactly she was going to make sure he doesn't seek retribution. Since it's still not a guarantee Lucille will tell her how to shrink people. 



Author's Response:

Hi Hector Michael is bruised and beat up but Mirielle is generalizing when she says uninjured as his condition could certainly have been worse with broken bones and such. Right now she is trying to instill fear to prevent Michael from lashing out IF he is restored.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2016 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 31

Confusing sentence here:

"Exactly. Now remember, I think you are going to get violent and try and hurt me or any of these girls, it will be pretty."

"It will be pretty?" What? That makes no sense. I think somewhere there's a typo.

All in all, good chapter. I was hoping that Mirielle gets more time with Michael. Perhaps, now it's Lucie's turn.

I hope Lucie gets some kinky ideas like Mirielle did.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the head's up. We shall what transpires in the next few chapters.

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