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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 34

Wtf just happened?

It seems like Lucie did something bad to Mirielle and we get the feeling she shrunk, but there's no way that can happen. I mean, what? Shrinking woman? No, this story will be messed up.

So let me get this straight. Lucie is asking for Michael's and Mirielle's hair. They are both agreeing for this change. U mean Mirielle WANTS Micheal to be big? Did she just agree to that? Why?

Why did Mirielle give her hair? What was the reason for that?

I feel like I need to look up some detailed explanation of what happened in this chapter because this is just random.

So Michael also agreed to be a ring? I know they were talking about turning into objects before, but I didn't think they would actually do it. Also, why would Mirielle let Michael become a ring? This is like Lucie possessed Mirielle for a minute.

I doubt Mirielle shrunk. That's just weird. Unless...... Unless Lucie feels so sorry for Micheal that she restored him, shrunk Mirielle and is going to let Michael abuse Mirielle. That could be true, but I don't like it one bit.

I hope this sensation Mirielle has is just Duggernaut's tricks for us to suspect random stuff.

Man, I hope the story at least remains sexy. I mean, this chapter just feels like the story is about to collapse. Of course, nothing happened yet, but it doesn't sound pleasant.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 34

Did Lucie just outscheme Mirielle? Is Mirielle now as helpless as Michael, with Lucie in control? Did Duggernaut just shrink a woman for the first time? This screws things up nicely.

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