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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2016 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 35

Well, I think Lucie is a witch or priestess that can read minds. She knows what the girls and Mirielle did because she sensed it. Then she sensed Michael's humiliation through his memory.

(I'm totally making this up, just becuase I think this situation is gonna be something simple to explain and won't be some complicated back story.)

Or Deandya shrunk herself to sit in Lucie's ear and tell her what to do. That could explain the strange behavior.

(Yeah, now I'm just saying random explanations. Haha!)

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Date: April 02 2016 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 35

So Mirielle shrunk and Michael is ....still shrunk. Lol! Then what was Michael talking about when he was shouting "It's happening, it's happening" like its the apocalypse or something?

Loving the comeback by Mirielle, "you were chasing that ass for 2 years". Haha!

Michael was so happy for like 2 minutes, then he felt sad. He wanted to rape her so bad, but then after thinking, he realized what's going on. Clearly his dick thought first instead of his head.

Mirielle is not even bothered that she is the same size as Micheal. I was expecting some fear in her eyes but she handled him very well. I bet she probably can rape Michael right now and he can't stop her.

Michael is like this dumbass brute who gets high off power and whines when he doesn't have it. He was cocky and greedy in the beginning of the story, then he was sad when he was shrunk, then he got happy and confident seeing Mirielle small, and then he lost it when he noticed he was small. I mean he just wants to fuck everyone and wants to be big.

I can picture a cartoon with Michael running toward Mirielle with his tongue hanging out and his dick erect and pointing at Mirielle. Then she looks at him in disgust and just extends her and pushes Michael down. Michael gets back up to get to Mirielle, but once again Mirielle pushes him down. Then Michael dodges her arm this time, but then Mirielle just kicks him in the balls and Michael falls down and cries. Mirielle rolls her eyes and walks away.

That cartoon is basically how I interpreted this chapter, and it does seem pretty funny.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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