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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 36

@Maximus.
Didn't you even suspect it could go wrong for Mirielle, Maximus? This plan could have never succeeded of you think about it. 

The important question is now. Was this planned after Mirielle left with Michael or was this whole scheme planned in advance? Than you have a totally different ball game. But I choose option 1.
The fact that they are in Madison's room means that at least one of her friends or she herself has good ties with the gypsys. But one thing remains. The power lies with the gypsys in this story and not with Madison. Madison wouldn't dare to go against them, only if she has a waterproof plan so they can't retaliate.
But Madison's motivations or role in this aren't perfectly clear yet.
We have 10 players in the game so far; Mortimer, Helena, Michael, Madison, Mirielle, Lucie, Adelina, Amber, Gennifer, Raven. With the current information of those 36 chapters you can puzzle about their possible personalities, motivations, backstories, average behaviour patterns, suspicious behaviour, how they relate to eachtother, how their behaviour could effect eachother and the timing of certain elements from the writer, etc. 

Can't wait for clash of emotions within and between the characters in Madison's room and some more light on the motivations behind them.

@Duggernaut.
2 chapters after Mirielle shrunk and still no contact with somebody else besides Michael. Keeping the suspense up. ;)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 36

Wow, awesome story telling Dugger! This is a turn of events I ddi not see coming. I'm not sure how much this is Maddisons doing or Lucie just punnishing Mirelle for wanting the power to use on others. 

 

Whatever it is, I'm glad they are back with Maddison and her freinds, those girls are fun! Now there are two to play with, this is going to be a wild ride.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2016 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 36

Man, this is just like Barrowman's prediction about one of the little girls telling Lucie about this whole thing. Especially since Madison had something to do with it.

I never liked Madison. Why she gotta be back? I guess some people like her or there's something special about her that I don't know. Also, did Lucie shrink Mirielle just because Mirielle wanted power?

I prefer a giantess Mirelle and a shrunken Madison. Michael worst fear is back. Giant sister!

I can't wait for the next chapter! (Wondering if Mo's story can get an update.)

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