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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 38

There will of course be more dialogue coming in the next couple of chapters that enriches the characters and provides some measure of context for the current predicament, well sort of. could be just another red herring to throw readers off the trail. As long as it's entyertaining and feasible within the framework of the story.... :)

Totally agreed with that statement. 

 

The crucible of human suffering can make or break a person's character. Michael is about to find out...

Can't wait for that. The build up towards that and conflicting feelings of the people around him through this development.


Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2016 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 38

Mirielle did the smart thing and these actions are a logical followup. But for Mirielle it is much easier to act cool and be at ease having sex with a non blood relative. But still, good strong character trade I can relate to.
Let see what Madison is playing at. Let see the interesting subtle development between those three, how they influence eachother. Madison is not invulnerable.
Mirielle seems to have the strongest mind with more life experience.
Michael has a long way to go.




Author's Response:

The crucible of human suffering can make or break a person's character. Michael is about to find out...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 12 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 38

Even though this is not exactly my cup of tea, I cannot deny how unbelievably erotic this chapter was.

I still prefer Mirielle to be a giantess, but I guess this is ok, story wise. Mirielle reminds me of Tom from Tom's story, especially with her confidence in trying to please a giantess.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Patience Tom, this story may yet turn around for you...

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