Date: April 16 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 39
Adelina is the one who knows at least, She turned to English first. Just to show Michael escape is impossible after she gives him some false hope.
The question is also why Lucie is there. We know more when Adelina has a conversation with Madison in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: April 16 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 39
I can't believe Michael just escaped like that. I thought he was just hiding there or probably fainted thinking it was the end of his life.
Instead, he take courage and sneaks into the rest of the house where Lucie and Adelina are. So Adelina changed into a hot girl who made out with Lucie and spoke some foreign language. Then Adelina says it's enough and she breaks it up with Lucie. (So the grandma made out with granddaughter?) maybe Lucie didn't know it was Adelina.
Adelina turned into a hot girl who spoke some weird language. Just imagine that a hot random girl pulled you into an alley, then into a room. She starts kissing you and you loosen up. Then she knocks you out with a punch. You wake up, and she is on top of you, riding you and you are tied to bed posts in what looks like an abandoned basement. You try speaking to her, but she responds in a foreign language seductively and you realize that communication is not an option. This girl just goes on and on and soon you don't care that you've been captured and then you actually start enjoying the sex. Then all of a sudden she transforms into a grandma and speaks in English. "How you like fucking grandmas?" She asks with a creepy smile and you just lay there shocked. (Cool story, huh.)
I would laugh so hard if Adelina transforms into a hottie and has fun with Michael. His reastion would be priceless.
I would enjoy it if Lucie finds Michael. Now that's a relationship that I want to see.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Adelina is presenting herself in a younger form, though she and Lucie did not make out, instead, they are arguing about shrinking people and the long ranging consequences that may happen and Lucie is trying to get her great grandmother to rescind her decision and restore Mchael and Mirielle. Your story is funny, something very similar to that happpens in a few movies (Species, They Live) where one of the partners change during the course of the act.
[Report This]Date: April 15 2016 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 39
Let's see where this is going. The fact that Adelina is casually downstairs in the Hearst home(if it is the Hearst home) and probably been there many times before is great cause for concern for some people.
Lucie's defiance to her supposed great grandmother is interesting. When Michael comes close they speak English. "Before irreparable harm has occured". That can mean so many things.
It looks good. How will Michael handle himself in the days/weeks to come in this form. Interesting that he is beginning to self reflect and he has resolve build in. With that attitude, even when you eventually break and go into depression mode, you will have the capacity within weeks to just stop being depressed and come out stronger, smarter and a better person.
Author's Response:
Yes, it is unusual that Adelina seems quite at home in the Hearst household. some of that will be explained in the next chapter. At some point after they disappeared fromt he foyer, the argument switched to English and they returned, or, is one of them aware they are not alone? :O