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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 40

Pre planned or not pre planned and at what level. I wonder with wich one you would go. I hoped the none pre-planned what happened to Michael, but that also planned. Her relationship with Madison I suspected was a pre planned from the moment you could feel Mirielle's plan was full of dangers. Hope that granddaughter isn't a certain someone. Why does Adelina care so much about Madison? Adelina trust Lucie enough with more information than Madison. We still don't know how much Madison knows.
It will be more revealing when Madison, Adelina and Lucie are in one room talking. We than finally get a glimps how far the relationship goes.

I have an idea what would be ideal in the end for Michael.

@Tom Speedy. Have a feeling your favorite character Mirielle comes back on top. Adelina is now too proud of herself, something has to go wrong with her supposed plan. Isn't clear what Madison learned from Adelina, but it doesn't seem like shrinking someone.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2016 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 40

As much as I love dialogue, this chapter had way too much, haha.

Here's my take on this:

Basically, Adelina wanted to punish Michael from a while back and she has given the power to Madison to keep Michael in check. Mirielle wasn't part of Adelina's shrink plan, but her desire for power convinced Adelina to shrink her too. And Madison controls her fate as well.

Another thing to note is how Adelina questions Lucie's sexual history-nothing. She never had fun with a tiny, which makes me wonder if Lucie is up next to have fun with Michael.

Story is starting to turn around for me. This chapter basically summarized all of Duggernaut's tricks in the last 5 chapters, haha.

I can't wait for the next one!

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