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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 46

@Tom Speedy. This was very revealing chapter indeed, but some of the things you mentioned were already obvious thanks to the clues in the previous chapters of the latest Hearst home part. We are still left hanging with a lot of questions and more plausible possibilities that are all interesting.

This chapter is so interesting. You can feel the tension between these 3 and ideas forming about replacing Mortimer. So much conflicting emotions Madison and Mirielle have. Mirielle being the mentally stronger one of the two. Both are smart but know Adelina is in total controll here. Adelina plays a sneaky game. Giving each character a different set of information, meant not for the other person or group of persons to know. Also some characters were togheter off screen and could have discussed some plans.

I agree with you that it seems for now we get the focus on Michael. I wonder how long they must wait, days, weeks? Is Adelina and Mirielle sleeping in the Hearst home and does Mortimer come home eventually? How much patience do each of them have?

About her knowledge of the whereabouts of Michael? First I think Adelina is letting the others think she is more powerfull than she actually is. With that, noboday even dares to think to double cross her. When Michael was eavesdropping, she didn't sensed him, only when he came very close to her, she reacted and change the conversation to English for Michael to hear, what she wanted him to hear. She must only sense him when he is in close proximity, like 2 to 3 meters(7 tot 10 feet). When she sensed him in Lucie's bag. It was easy to conclude that Lucie took Michael, that was her intention all along to let Lucie leave with Michael.

Adelina went out of her way to make Michael even more affraid of her sister with will contrast even harder with the kindness that Lucie is showing.



Author's Response:

There is another descriptive chapter coming from Adelina's point of view

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2016 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 46

@HectorVanDyne. That was just Madison acting though in front of Michael and Lucie. The moment she knew Michael wasn't in the room she dared to show concern.
That mother transformation really hit her hard as I expected and obvious on purpose off course. The fact that Madison didn't came downstairs with her was of the pain and shame. Can you imagine how dirty Madison would have felt if she saw a emotional reaction of Michael to the image of his mother.
Adelina is without mercy and rubs salt in that wound in this chapter and basically threatens Madison that everything can happen to Michael and that she has nothing to say about it.

You can clearly see Madison having trouble, because she isn't as talketive anymore after Adelina mentioned that. But she doesn't dare to question Adelina.

 

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 46

So she does care about her brother?  I am kinda surprised since earlier chapters implied she was planning on eventually killing him or was she simply not serious about that?

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 46

Now we see what else Adelina finds important. Mortimer Hearst and the company. Mirielle provided them with much useful information. Adelina must be familiar with Helena or she could never copy her in the way that she did.

Madison seems to have no trouble with Adelina's suggestions to remove Mortimer. Wonder if Madison and Adelina were aware that Madison would inherit the company and not Michael.

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2016 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 46

This chapter was so clear. I understand what happened with Mirielle, if Adelina knows about Michael, the lesson for Madison. It all makes sense!

I wasn't expecting this boatload of conclusive evidence all in one chapter. I thought you may leave us hanging on certain things. However, the Merielle and Madison story seems over, and now we just have Lucie left.

Adelina tells the other two women to wait for Lucie. In other words, it's like an excuse for Lucie to have like 2+ chapters to have her way with Michael.

I find it creepy that Adelina knows about Michael's whereabouts and it's like someone just put a camera or tracker on him and is stalking him. I bet Adelina also senses Lucie when she is aroused. Now wouldn't that be something.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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