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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 47

There is another descriptive chapter coming from Adelina's point of view

Can't wait for that Adelina point of view chapter. :)

 

I don't think it would go so good for Michael to try his luck again arachnids or serpents. Maybe he should stay with Lucie?

He should stay with Lucie. I mention those examples as maybe interesting just to add how dangerous his shrunken state is if he falls into the wrong hands or if he is left alone in the open world.



Author's Response:

I agree whole hearted ly with assessment of how particular dangerous the world can be and is especially for someone so tiny. Imagine a bee sting...

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2016 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 47

Let see if he gets full enjoyment this time. ;)

Only the 2 of them live there. Get a feeling they are far away from their clan.

Can't wait to see him battle spiders, snakes and other giants. How would a 3 inch man survive on his own in this world.

 



Author's Response:

I don't think it would go so good for Michael to try his luck again arachnids or serpents. Maybe he should stay with Lucie?

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2016 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 47

I remember when Michael was afraid of all this giantess stuff. Now he is enjoying it.

Michael is starting to remind me of Tom in Tom's story. He is making jokes of her body and grinning all the time. Seems very Tom like.

And to Lucie, I say give in to the temptation.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Lucie is much more gentle than the others and he feels safer with her all the while she is battling the pull of the curse...

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