Reviews For Michael's Story
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Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 49

Interesting. I wonder why her plan was so complicated and took so long. Must have been quite a few bumps on the road. Wonder if the families got mixed or that there are more offspring from Adelina or her child(ren) or grandchildren. You can really feel the urgency and that this plan must succeed NOW no matter what. Wonder if the plan is only motivated out of revenge.

There can be all sorts of combinations for Adelina's motives to what's happening now. The short happy moment for Michael with Lucie feels like the calm before the storm.

 

 

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 49

Well then I like that revelation.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 49

Well, now that was a mind bender. It's starting to make more sense. Or is it....

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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