Date: January 09 2016 4:54 PM Title: And We Tremble
Not much to say, exept that I enjoyed the interaction in this chapter. I'm wondering if maybe you aren't really that interested in this series as these chapters are quite a bit shorter than the ones in Mask of the Gods
Your description dose make me wonder about the gianesses home. Has she built a home out of mudbrick or something? That's the picture I had in my head.
It also leaves me wondering what she has planned for the little people.
Anyway, if you decide to do the super hero story, I'd rather an original character.
Date: January 05 2016 8:58 PM Title: And We Tremble
Not much to say, exept that I enjoyed the interaction in this chapter. I'm wondering if maybe you aren't really that interested in this series as these chapters are quite a bit shorter than the ones in Mask of the Gods
Your description dose make me wonder about the gianesses home. Has she built a home out of mudbrick or something? That's the picture I had in my head.
It also leaves me wondering what she has planned for the little people.
Anyway, if you decide to do the super hero story, I'd rather an original character.
Author's Response:
Cool, thanks for the feedback! And yeah, I'm not as into this one as Masks, partially because I don't know what I want to happen and simply because the more I write for the new giantess the more I feel like I might end up writing another character just like Vera, which is not what I want at all. I will keep up with it but it will be sparser. Its also because I have quite a few other writing projects going on right now that keep distracting me. Nevertheless I will not give up on this story.
Date: January 04 2016 8:37 PM Title: And We Tremble
I really want you to continue from here, regardless of the review count because right now, I really want to know what happens from here because the titaness is keen to find where these humans are from AND she has territory carved out. I really really want to know more about here.
However if you do try the superhero one instead, I suggest an original character. Gives you room to play with. Need not be a giant woman but a man whose super power is shrinking.
Author's Response:
Very true, I probably will keep up with thus one, but it may be more infrequent