Reviews For Tiny In The Dorms
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Reviewer: Bashou Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2018 6:47 AM Title: Dropped Off.

I know this story was done 2 years ago now but i can't help thinking it's too bad that Melissa didn't go at the gym workout with Jen along the shoe. 

I'd rather prefered a chapter focused on the gym as the classroom and the experience with Hayley.  

Nonetheless, i really appreciate all your stories as a new nember and i reckon that you're problably the best author focused on the feet/shoe torture by aware and unaware girl's with Luidgi in the F/f genre.  I love the situation when a micro girl is carrried along a beautiful girl's shoe and then, from nowhere another girl's shoe carry inadvertenly the poor micro girl. 

Furthermore, i love the shoe description whether it's a sneaker, a boot, an ankle boot or a sandal even if your stories are apparently focused on sneakers.

I'm looking forward a new story and new adventures with Melissa. ^^

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2016 10:22 AM Title: Final Act!

You did a wonderful job, wrapping this up! Any sequel should start with Brianna getting ambush-shrunk. On the excuse of teaching her a "lesson" about borrowing Mel's things without the latter's face-to-face permission!

;-)

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 11:45 PM Title: Not There! :O

Wonderful chapter! Even better than the last! The in shoe masterbation and orgasm is what I've been waiting for the entire story! It was perfect, thank you! More like this please! 

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 11:43 PM Title: New Experience

Loved this chapter! Hope to see more of Lili and Melissa together! Maybe Melissa can play with Lili's feet & toes next time? 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 5:43 PM Title: Not There! :O

Little Mel "shoe" is getting choosy about where she sleeps.

;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2016 7:13 PM Title: New Experience

I wonder if Mel will freak out at finding the shrink gun is gone.

Author's Response:

you will have to wait and see! 

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2016 11:59 PM Title: Dropped Off.

Good chapter. I like the focus on girls shoes. I think Melissa should live out her fantasy a bit more, and describe what she does and how she feels when inside a girls shoes. Does the smell arouse her? Does the thought of being under giant toes make her horny? Does she pleasure herself when trapped inside etc! 

Reviewer: Tree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2016 3:08 AM Title: Night Before

I like your story please continue , I hope melissa advanture to other body example butt, hair ,etc, and small forever👍👍👍



Author's Response:

I was planning on having multiple adventure stories that Melissa will have.  Like one adventure will end and another will begin.  

Reviewer: Dody Signed [Report This]
Date: August 13 2016 9:09 PM Title: Night Before

Please add a chapter where one of the girls puts Melissa in her butt, for example at the gym like in the other story of yours. It will be very sexy and hot!!! 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2016 4:12 PM Title: Dropped Off.

She should've had herself brought all the way to the dorm room. :-(

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2016 7:14 PM Title: Again... Forgotten???

I hope Our Little Heroine doesn't hide out in the gym bag. :-(

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2016 4:12 PM Title: Stranger's House

With her luck, she'll more likely be "borrowed" (along with the shoes) by either Jill or some friend/neighbor of the sisters before Jen even wakes up.

Nice update. Thanks for ending the unawareness. :-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 7:30 PM Title: Unintentional Ride

How about Jen finally becoming aware of her erstwhile passenger?

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 8:29 PM Title: Stranger Danger!

Loving this so far.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 6:26 PM Title: Stranger Danger!

So, let me get this straight. Jen the 27 year-old blonde is going back to her house. While Jill the black-haired younger sister is going back to her new dorm room. But, it's the frayed shoe lace of the older sister that Melissa is entangled within.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2016 9:54 PM Title: Not Found.....No Longer Sock Fun!

The plot thickens.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2016 8:54 PM Title: Not Found.....No Longer Sock Fun!

Well, either chapter 11 is going to be the final chapter for both Melissa and this story! Or, Melissa is suddenly going to develop indestructibility through that miraculous device called the deus ex machine.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2016 8:01 PM Title: Shoes AGAIN!

Melissa will suffocate from all that sweaty sock mustiness. That's what I think will happen. ;-)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2016 7:54 PM Title: Side Tracked by Friend

She'll probably get mistaken for a bug and get stamped on by Kinsey. Thereby making chapter 9 the conclusion of this story.

;-D

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 8:57 PM Title: Through The Day

So, Melissa goes from outside the sock, but in the shoe, to inside both????

Talk about insult added to injury!

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